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Friday, November 7, 2014

Bhakti lata At A Glance

This was my homework assignment today for one of my English classes:

Draft your own autobiographical poem and follow this structure:

The first line is your first name, followed by a line of three words that describe you to yourself. The next line is something you love, then something you hate, something you fear, and something you wish for. The last line is your last name.

Bhakti lata
Searching, committed, deep
I love to listen to the murmurs and sing like a tiger
        the Lord's holy name
I hate my own crippling weaknesses
I fear that I am unlovable
I wish to love unconditionally
Dasi


P.S. So, dear reader, what's YOUR poem?


3 comments:

  1. this is kind of rough... but...

    kadamba mala
    exhausted, wanting, selfish
    husband, children, sri guru
    unretractable mistakes, my mind
    being left alone, loss
    accepting love, from myself and others
    devi dasi

    (p.s. - your sari in that photo is amazing! xo)

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  2. beautiful Kadamba Mala!! Thanks for sharing. And thanks for the compliment ;)

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  3. I love reading your words Bhakti Lata ji

    Here's my little effort:
    Vyoma
    seeker, learner, helper
    loves the path to truth
    dislikes suffering
    fears her own pride
    wishes for pure love to reside in her heart
    tan

    :)

    Thank you

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